preliminary task with a directors commentary

Here is another copy of our preliminary task but this time we have added in a voice over commentary. Me, Jessie and Helen decided to evaluate our video. The main comments which we brought up was:

Negatives

• The lighting of the first couple of shots is much different to the rest of the video. If we were to re make the video we would defiantly consider a different type of lighting.
• Some of the shots are out of focus.
• Not all the shots were filmed in the intended environment.
• Some of the shots would have been better if a tripod was used.

Positives

• Some of the shots were executed really well such as the shots when Ollie was on the bike.
• The editing worked really.
• The lighting outside was key to the video and worked well.
• Worked really well as a team.

Overall we are really happy with this short video as it was the first proper video we have made. Yes it wasn't the best we could have done as if we were to do it again, there would be some shots which we would film again. On the other hand some of our camera work was really good and it has taught us to plan before which we will do a lot of when it comes to our actual video.